My best friend (who encouraged me to start this campaign) read my GFM introduction story and says it’s too long. I disagree. I know I can be wordy, but I cut allot out of this appeal before publishing it. I want to make sure that people who don’t know about the device I’m talking about gets information on the device and on why I need it. So if anyone is willing, would you please go and read my appeal and tell me if you think it’s too long. If it is then what should I cut out? Thank you.