Did i give out too much information

  • 24 November 2021
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Hello! Can someone please tell me if I gave out too much information in my story/bio. Or maybe not enough information, I’m not really sure exactly how these work, I was persuaded by friends and family to start one and I just wanna make sure I do it right. 
thanks in advance! 

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Hi @Rachel Elliott!  I would suggest including some more detail in your story and checking out our post on how to write a fundraising story: 

Some key takeaways are:

  1. Start by creating a title that makes your cause clear.
  2. Be detailed, but don’t overdo it. 
  3. Show emotion, and explain how some support would mean the world to you and those involved in your cause. 
  4. Keep the paragraphs short and easy to understand.  

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