is my story detailed enough?

  • 23 November 2021
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I'm just wondering if anyone could tell me if my story is detailed enough or to much lol or what. I'm not the person to usually do stuff like this but stuff happens. I would appreciate any feed back preferably no rude comments. Thanks in advance. Bless you all 


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I’d love to help you @Shelyn Collier Would you mind sharing your story’s text here with me? 

@Jules  https://gofund.me/ea3997ae. I think I'm doing it right I'm not sure 

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