Looking for feedback with story

  • 24 November 2021
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I’m looking for advice with my story,  daughter passed due to covid I'm still speechless

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Im new to this, never was comfortable requesting help, guess I will just wing this

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@Rich J I’m so deeply sorry for your loss. My thoughts are with you and your family during this incredibly difficult time. 

I’d suggest starting out by reading through these posts:

  1. How to write a fundraising story - Adding a bit more emotion or points on who Joy was can make this story feel more personal for those who didn’t know her well, but still want to help. Collaborating with other family members to write your story might make it even more special as well by including details on her life from different perspectives.
  2. How to choose a fundraiser image - Including more high-quality pictures of Joy and her family could also help donors feel a personal connection to your cause. If you add more text, using those photos to break up the text a bit would be a nice touch and make the story easy to read.

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